Centeio,+Vincent

My social issue is on censorship in the Internet. Censorship is the act of censoring, or blocking items that are objectionable to moral, the military, politics, etc. Many websites helps students with their the homework, projects and learning in school. But, the most websites that assists the students with their academic achievement are censored, which deprives them of their learning. This would also help teachers show their students a better learning experience. YouTube is one that is censored in schools. In the irc at Brockton High School, students can't not access YouTube in the computers. Only the teachers have access to YouTube to show. When I search for a picture for a project I will look for a really good one, but the best pictures are blocked in the school library. This problem need a great adjustment to.
 * My Initial Proposal**

My purpose tentative solution is to unban websites that are blocked by the schools. I could create a petition for students have these sites to be unbanned. I would form a group or club to find ways of getting around censoring to help to learn better. i would get the department of education to unband the websites to help the student.

My purpose for writing is to persuade the department of education to unband websites to improve getting a better learning experiene for everyone.

The steps I will take to solving it is to bring everything on time. The SAP task and definition and brainstorming will be done by 12/6.I have found my book, database, and wbebsites to be on my annotated bibliography.My proposal is complete to be added on wikispaces. My 25 notecards and 5 bibliographycard will be done. The solution paper will be done with the outline, first draft, the revised draft, and the final draft. Finally i will present my product on 1/14 I will use all my time wisely on finishing my project.

Annotated Working Bibliography Print Day, Nancy. Censorship, or Freedom of Expression? Minneapolis: Lerner Publications, 2001. Print.Censorship stops us from expressing thing that need to be said Does this go with your point about education and learning? Not clear.

Website Phillips, Peter. "Media Censorship in America Project Censored." Third World Traveler, Third World, United States Foreign Policy, Alternative Media, Travel. The Third World Traveler. Web. 09 Dec. 2010. [|http://www.thirdworldtraveler.com/Media/Media Censor_ProjCensor.html]. Vincent, why are you using this website? Annotate it with information summarizing why it is useful.

Database "Breaking Internet Censorship Will Take More Than Circumvention Tools." //Internet Censorship//. BBC Monitoring Media, 23 Nov. 2010. Web. 9 Dec. 2010. <http://http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/ Censorship in the internet deprives one from better learnig. The BBC is a good source. What sort of examples are in here that will support your paper? Note: You do not need that long URL. Just the first part, up to the first slash after ".com" is enough.

Websites that are censored -- this is a good idea, to start a list of these here. [|www.photobucket.com] [|www.youtube.com]

Vincent, this is a good start. It is true that a lot of pictures are blocked in the IRCs and that there is a lot of good material on YouTube that is blocked as well. Would you be interested in interviewing one of the people responsible for deciding what gets blocked and why? I could put you in touch with someone from the technology department who could explain the policy and answer any questions you have, and also explain how sites get unbanned (it does happen, but usually teachers have to request it---it would be interesting to find out how they would handle a student request). It seems like that would be important for you to understand and include in your paper the current policies.

You will need to find some good example of websites and content that is blocked that could be educational and also some articles that support that idea. I'm sure you will be able to do that.

You still need to add three annotated bibliography entries to the initial proposal -- 1 print, 1 web, 1 database. Okay, good, I see you added these. A few notes above in response to the addition of these.

Ms. Doherty

Intermedate Proposal

My original solution as to start a petition to end it. After searching through the infrormation that i have found is that my solution is still feasible. It is till feasible because the FCC is starting to create a plan to avoid it. it is specific because censoring cause people of avoiding their right of freedom of speech and I am using the right to petition. Makes sense doesn't it?

Working Thesis Statement My solution to internet censorsip is to create a petition to end it because amny of people will join.

Audience my audience will be school student because they are missing their right to access information. internet users also because they are furious that the stuff they need of want to put up are censoered or filtered

Research 1: we have the right to accesss infromation 2:the government has to let us speak what we want because of the 1st amendment 3: many internet providers are bieng critized for having too much control over the access of sites 4: some fansites were accussed of being too restrictive of what is put on it 5:censorship has a great effect on china

Websites are the source that gave me the most help What do i still need to know? Does censorship effect every single person? there are a variety of stratagies that will help me. Statistics because I can show how many people are effected by censorship. Cause and effect because i can show the causes of censorship does and the effect. Definition because I can tell what censorshop is and how does is apply to the 1st amendment